Thursday, February 3, 2011
Ellie Mcdoodle Have Pen Will Travel
My story Ellie Mcdoodle Have Pen Will Travel was so good that I had to read it twice.Its about a girl named Ellie who is facing her biggest fear............................... going on vacation with her annoying relatives?Times get rough in the car on the way there.There was kicking fighting and arguing.Ellie and her cousin Erick are are not the best match.There is more arguing between them two then everybody put together.So when they fially arrived the found there cabin.Ellie was not impressed because it was so tiny and because she thought it would be like a real camping trip with a tent and a fire and everyhing.But at least there was bunk beds but to her that was not good enough.So the next morning she went for a walk in the woods so then she saw some footprints she thought that they were a mans footprint and she was right it lead to a guy named Eddie now new how to camp he had everything but before she knew it she had to go home to have some dinner.So after dinner that night they went to bed so that egsact night Ellie did not have the best luck because just then her cousin Tiff(Tiffany)peaed the bed and the matress was so thin it came right trough and on to me so I had to leave my matress outside to dry.So you can just say it was a rough night for me I guess.So the next day we went to the lodge it was cool but then I saw one sock and one shoe so I knew that my monkey brother was there so then we went back to camp and I went back to see Eddie but he was not there so I cryed with sobby tears.but I bet the look of your faces I think you would intested in reading this book.So if you really want to just ask me.I really you like this book.
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